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Post by Jennifer Hudson on Apr 19, 2012 19:42:10 GMT -5
 Title: African Skies: The Untold Love Story The novel is about a young African-American woman who returns to her native land of Africa in search of her true love. Throughout the novel she searches the continent to find the man loves so dearly, and battles through obstacles of the African landscape and the people include an indigenous African tribe. |
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Post by Natalie Portman on Apr 19, 2012 20:13:02 GMT -5
Natalie: This is really, really strong. I can see this on display at Barnes and Noble [RIP Borders  ]. I think that there's strength in this with your look, and the setting of the sky. I also really like your style and pose; however, I wish that I could see a bit more of that rock on which you're leaning. That's my only real critique with this. Great job!! |
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Post by Adele on Apr 21, 2012 12:08:18 GMT -5
Adele: You look hot and sexy. I still think last week photo was stronger than this week. It was just okay for me this week. I want it to be more spicy and sensual. But once again, I love your eye contact with the camera.
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Post by Amanda Kimmel on Apr 21, 2012 21:05:56 GMT -5
Amanda: Your description makes this sound more like an adventure novel, given that it's set in Africa. You're looking for your African prince but don't find him until later and you have to go through hardships and poverty and... yeah. I'm not sure how it fits. Still, your photo is gorgeous. Love the pose. The expression sucks me in and shows a yearning, something you will do anything to get, and your hair is great. I prefer this to last week's, though I did hate your photo last round, but I don't completely see the connection to the theme even IF this is a VERY good book cover for a great idea that I might even read. It just doesn't scream "romance."
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Post by Hayley Williams on Apr 22, 2012 3:12:28 GMT -5
Hayley: I'm not a fan of your description, so I'm going to pretend like I didn't read it and I'll critique this based off of the story I get from the picture. I love your pose in this picture. It's a very flirtatious/seductive pose. Well, at least for someone who's standing up. The confidence you exude in the picture is fantastic and I could see this working well as a cover. Just for a more urban environment than Africa. I don't see her going on an adventure in this outfit with that styling and makeup.
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]. I think that there's strength in this with your look, and the setting of the sky. I also really like your style and pose; however, I wish that I could see a bit more of that rock on which you're leaning. That's my only real critique with this. Great job!!
